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The Mommy’s Pen Podcast – Episode 5: Second Plot Point (on Gardam Street!)

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This week on the podcast we discuss The Penderwicks on Gardam Street by Jeanne Birdsall and the story structure concept of the second plot point.

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Show Notes:

Season 1, Episode 5: Second Plot Point (on Gardam Street!)

We review The Penderwicks on Gardam Street, the second book in the beloved Penderwicks series by Jeanne Birdsall. Nora and I reminisce about meeting Birdsall at Wordstock a few years back. Not only does she write excellent books, she has the good sense to wear Haflinger slippers to a book signing. My admiration for her knows no bounds.

This episode’s art is a doctored up picture I took at Wordstock in 2013 where we saw Birdsall read and she signed a copy of The Penderwicks at Point Mouette for Nora.

I also explain the concept of a second plot point using Gardam Street as an example.

Read the transcript.

Things we mention that you should check out:

  • Our mailing list! Sign up today and you’ll get cool subscriber only perks like bonus material and artwork from my forthcoming novel, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap and the List.
  • Wordstock is an annual book festival in Portland, but I guess it’s now called the Portland Book Festival, which is lame, if you ask me. But still, it’s a good festival and worth the trip if you’re anywhere in the Pacific Northwest.
  • If you want to learn more about the second plot point and the four-act structure for stories, I highly recommend the work of Larry Brooks. You can see a list of his books at the Story Fix website.

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The Mommy’s Pen Podcast – Episode 2: Cleopatra & the First Plot Point

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This week on the podcast we discuss ancient Egyptian body odor and the story structure concept of the first plot point.

It’s twelve minutes of fun! Listen now…

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You can also listen using any number of podcast platforms and apps including Spotify, Breaker, Pocket Casts, Radio Public, Stitcher, and Google Podcasts.

Show Notes:

Season 1, Episode 2: First Plot Point

Nora reviews Cleopatra VII: Daughter of the Nile from the Royals Diaries series. Sue explains the function of a first plot point (FPP) and Nora takes a stab at identifying the FPP in Cleopatra and Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone.

Nora also clues us in on how ancient Egyptians handled body odor (hint: it involves snakes) and points to some great places to learn more about history.

Read the full transcript.

Things we mention that you should check out:

  • Our mailing list! Sign up today and you’ll get cool subscriber only perks like bonus material and artwork from my forthcoming novel, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap and the List.
  • You can follow Mary Beard on Twitter and read her column “A Don’s Life” in the Times Literary Supplement. But please do yourself a big favor and head over to YouTube, search for her name, and start binge watching documentaries on ancient Rome. This woman is one of my heroes — a brilliant presenter AND totally unwilling to wear make-up or a bra while fronting programs for the BBC.
  • Horrible Histories started as book series and is now a television series in the UK. It’s bloody good fun and you can watch all the episodes on Hulu.com.
  • If you want to learn more about first plot points and a four-act structure for stories, I highly recommend the work of Larry Brooks. You can see a list of his books at the Story Fix website.

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